Write a letter to your colleagues. In your letter • remind your colleagues what the special occasion you were celebrating was • thank them for the card and gift • explain why you like the gift and how you will use it

Dear Mike, Hope you are doing well. It's been a long since we met after

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meeting set-up was held in Aleska. I would like to say thanks for your gifts, which I got recently from you. As you know, we used to celebrate the occasion on Jun 12th every year and it was an auspicious day for us indeed.

This

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celebration was being continued for a long time,

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, the main reason behind

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function will not only make us happy but

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illustrates our culture in all aspects.

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, there is a special motto behind

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ceremonial ritual is to stick all people together. By the way, thanks for your gifts indeed, those articles are clearly showing our rituals through the proper images,

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, I can consider them as souvenirs of the eve, which was celebrated for

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occasion. Hope we will meet soon at my home. I would like to hear from you. Best wishes, Mark

ravikrishna045

May 17, 2023

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Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

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Lexical resource: 8.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

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160 words

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Write a letter to your colleagues. In your letter • remind your colleagues what the special occasion you were celebrating was • thank them for the card and gift • explain why you like the gift and how you will use it

The international community must act immediately to ensure that all countries reduce their consumption of fossil fuels, such as gas and oil. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Whether or not someone achieves their aims is mostly by a question of luck.

As parents, they should be required to attend parenting courses every year to bring up their children well and give them a better environment for growth. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

In some countries, more and more people are becoming interested in finding out about the history of the house or building they live in. What are the reasons for this? How can people research this?