Some people feel that manufacturers and supermarkets have the responsibility to reduce the amount of packaging of goods. Others argue that customers should avoid buying goods with a lot of packaging. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

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some people think that the

responsibility

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of reducing product packaging belongs to producers and supermarkets, many individuals argue that

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costumers

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have that

responsibility

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. In

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paper, I would discuss

both

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points of view in-depth and present examples to show why

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assertions are compelling. On the one hand, those who

advocates

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for producers should reduce packaging agree that they package their

goods

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so they have the

responsibility

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to limit it.

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, they protect their

products

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by using excessive

packages

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.

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, to converse easily broken

goods

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or food, they have to cover more plastic bags on their commodities.

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,

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could reduce the rate of

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goods

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they could be presented for a long time.

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, they can attract more

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costumers

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customers

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to buy their

products

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by packaging carefully their

goods

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. People are often attracted by luxurious and well-decorated things, so they can sell more commodities

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consumers and gain a high amount of

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market share.

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, proponents of

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costumers

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customers

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should take

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responsibility

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to avoid buying

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packaged

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have several reasons. The first reason is they have a substantial effect on companies' activities through their preference. If they avoid

buy

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too

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packaged

products

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, corporations will realise the significant change in

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' interest,

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, they will package their

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less and raise their awareness about protecting

environment

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. Another reason is using more packages, especially plastic packages, can have a detrimental

affect

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effect

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on their health.

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, many micro-plastic molecules could move into their stomach by eating food which

are

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wrapped

by

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in

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plastic bags.

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, it has direct and robust effects on their health

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packaging a lot. In conclusion, I believe that

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of them should take

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responsibility

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to reduce the

amount

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number

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of packaging

products

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to conserve our environment through many feasible solutions that

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could do in the future.