The chart below give us information about how families in one country spent their weekly income in 1968 and in 2018. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparison where relevant.
The charts compare the proportion of expenditure of some giving families per week in 1968 and 2018. It is measured in percentages.
Overall
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it is clear that
the family spent more on food, Housing, leisure, and transportation Linking Words
while
order receive marginal expenses.
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Firstly
, in 1968 about 35% of their salaries were spent on food. Linking Words
However
, clothing and footwear and housing were not less than 10% each. Linking Words
Also
personal equipment leisure and household property at a marginal difference Linking Words
while
fuel and power and transport and nearly equal.
Moreso, in 2018, families spent not less than 22.5% on leisure, transportation, housing and food. Linking Words
Furthermore
, household equipment remains constant at 8%. Linking Words
However
, fuel and power, clothing and footwear and personal goods were 4% and 5% respectively.Linking Words
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "however, while".
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Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.
Vocabulary: The word "marginal" was used 2 times.
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