The graph below shows the number of shops that closed and the number of new shops that opened in one country between 2011 and 2018. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The graph given depicts the number of shops which closed and opened in one country between 2011 and 2018.
Overall
, the number of Linking Words
Use synonyms
shop
that Change to a plural noun
shops
openings
decreased over the period given. Meanwhile, the number of Use synonyms
shop
Use synonyms
closures
increased Use synonyms
in
the end of the period.
To start with, in 2011 the Change the preposition
at
shop
Use synonyms
openings
Use synonyms
was
roughly 8500 Change the verb form
were
stores
and the Use synonyms
closures
Use synonyms
shop
at 6500 Use synonyms
stores
which meant that Use synonyms
opening
shops higher than Correct article usage
the opening
Use synonyms
closures
. Correct article usage
the closures
In contrast
, the opening of shops declined substantially to 4000 Linking Words
stores
, Use synonyms
while
the Linking Words
shop
Use synonyms
closures
dropped slightly to 6000 Use synonyms
stores
in 2012. Use synonyms
Moreover
, over the next two years, the Linking Words
shop
Use synonyms
openings
surpassed the Use synonyms
shop
Use synonyms
closures
.
Turning to 2015, the Use synonyms
shop
Use synonyms
closures
plunged sharply to Use synonyms
its
lowest at under 1000 Correct pronoun usage
their
stores
, Use synonyms
whereas
the Linking Words
shop
Use synonyms
openings
fell moderately to 4000 Use synonyms
stores
. Use synonyms
Furthermore
, in 2016, the opening Linking Words
shop
took its place again as the highest and remained constant until 2018, Use synonyms
while
the Linking Words
openings
, Use synonyms
conversely
went down.Linking Words
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Sentences: Add more complex sentences.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "while".
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Vocabulary: Rephrase your introduction. Words match: 85%.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words shop, openings, closures, stores with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "number of" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: The word "give" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 3 times.
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