University students are increasingly studying abroad as part of their studies. Do the advantages of this trend outweighs the disadvantages.

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in studying
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outside side
countries
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to get more knowledge and to provide more science to their country is
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common idea these days, in
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will set some
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student
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who travels for study purposes
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the
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right side of improving
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own mind which leads to the future, the advantage of going
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to get more
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is a very great idea to improve
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mind and the way of thinking, student seeking
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a new cultures
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and
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number of
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are mostly kind of people that know how to fight,
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help, that
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them a chance to challenge and behave like
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adult,
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studying abroad are
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a strong responsibility and how to deal with specific situations. now a day
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parents
should
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their children to travel and study for
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own goods.
On the other hand
, there are too many disadvantages we can discuss
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as lowering children's limits in thinking and searching for there needs of others. The longer you live the more you realized that the only truly exists in
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world is how we treat our family and how we push them to increase their knowledge and open minds we are
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them by controlling them and
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cycle of education.
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the disadvantage,
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students should give more and push themselves and offence to collect more information and
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them self by studying
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outside side
their homes.
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