You travelled by plane last week and your suitcase was lost. You have still heard nothing from the airline company. Write to the airline and • explain what happened • describe your suitcase and tell them what was in it • find out what they are going to do about it

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Dear Sir/Madam, I am writing

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letter to you to complain about the lost suitcase, which happened on May 10th, Friday. I was waiting for picking it up from the conveyor belt of the Baggage Claim Area at the Montreal International Airport. I had never seen it there because someone had picked it up intentionally or unintentionally. My suitcase was

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, contained a Mackbook Pro, headphones, some clothes and 1 book. I already filled out the detailed item lost application form at the information desk. The estimated value of the loss is about $1200. I would like to request you to explain to me what you are going to do about

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missing item, what actions you would take and what if I would not receive it. I need it as early as possible because my laptop contained a lot of precious information regarding my work and study. Please send me your detailed response via Email to [email protected] or contact at + 1 (437) 985-8028. I look forward to hearing from you. Yours Sincerely, Gaurav Kalathiya

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0Word repetition
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2Grammar mistakes
 

7 paragraphs

192 words

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 7.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 7.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 8.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

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Topic Vocabulary:

flight itinerary
baggage claim
missing luggage
distinguishing features
high-value items
sentimental value
compensation policy
alternative measures
regular updates
trace the case
inquire
express dissatisfaction

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