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Information technology is changing many aspects of our lives and now dominates our home, leisure and work activities. To what extent do the benefits of information technology outweigh the disadvantages?

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In modern
life
technology
 is altering many ways of our
life
,
that
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 process has some good and bad sides. I guess
for
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nowadays youngsters have more advantages and in the following statements, I want to discuss some of them. Main of the pluses of developing
information
technology
 in modern
life
 might be a simple opportunity to find several numbers of sources for
self-educatin
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self-education
self-educatin'
.
People
 who want to expand their knowledge in some spaces can find a lot of data
in
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google
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Google
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 or youtube. They can follow some social groups who have the same interest in education
can
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and can
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 share
information
 about subjects
in
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 social media.
Also
,
information
technology
 can help
people
 to find new friends in the world and share their own cultures and national things with themselves. Communication became
more easy
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 for
people
 in the world.
in addition
, if someone feels isolated they will have opportunities to find new friends or
interestr
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interests
in
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on
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 social media
As
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google statistics show that most
of
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the
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people
 meet with new friends,
interests
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and interests
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in
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on
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 social media. One of the valuable
diadvantages
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disadvantages
advantages
 of the influence of
information
technology
 progress might be
sedentary
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a sedentary
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 lifestyle. Adults and young
people
 will sit in front of monitors or phones and it will lead to some
healts
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health
 issues.
Unfortunately
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,Unfortunately
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 more
people
 avoid sports, walking or doing some outdoor activities.
As a result
, nowadays there are examples of illnesses about
this
 essential problem. In conclusion,
i
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 want to say that modern
information
technology
 helps us to develop our knowledge and be closer to
people
 who have a lot of distance between themselves. I strongly believe that if
people
 find
balance
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a balance
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 between
information
technology
 and sport activity they will be successful in their
life
.
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