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More and more people are moving away from agricultural background to relocate to cities in order to look for work.What will be the consquences of this.What solutions can you offer.

#people #background #cities #work #consquences #offer
In the contemporary
epoch
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 individuals opt to reside in urban areas rather than in
countryside
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the countryside
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 in order for them
do
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to
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 make a decent living.Not only does
this
 phenomenon have
adverse
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 impact on countries economy,but
also
dwindle
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agricultural
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the agricultural
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sphere
.
This
 discourse is to appraise reasons
of
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for
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this
 issue and preventive measures to tackle
with
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apply
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it.
To begin
 with, insufficient salaries and low standards of living seem to have been the main reasons why nowadays
people
 relocate from agricultural centres to urban
cities
.Youngsters are driven by the vision of better life and
therefore
 they step out of their comfort zone and move to
big
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the big
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city
.Moving to
bigger
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a bigger
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city
 for educational purposes is
second
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a second
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 major reason why
people
 leave their small towns.
Recent
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A recent
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 survey conducted by
British
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a British
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 journalist revealed that 70% of
people
 who moved from agricultural
cities
 to
capital
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the capital
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 are students who are in
process
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the process
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 of obtaining higher education.
Last
 but not least career perspective.Success in
job
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the job
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sphere
another
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is another
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 leverage which
detain
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 you from
hustle
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the hustle
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 and bustle of the
city
. So,what needs to be done to prevent
economical
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collapse and decline of
agricultural
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the agricultural
an agricultural
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sphere
? From my standpoint the responsibility for
this
 change
on
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is on
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 the shoulders of
government
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the government
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.The more government will subsidise
in
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apply
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the agricultural
sphere
 and agricultural
cities
,the fewer
people
 will feel
need
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the need
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 to move from the
city
.New work
place
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places
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 should be opened and
job
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a job
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 market should be developed in
such
cities
 so that
people
 can pursue their
career
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careers
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 without leaving
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their hometown
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hometown
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hometowns
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.Improving
educational
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the educational
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 system and school curriculum is
also
indispensable
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an indispensable
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 part of agricultural policy.
To sum up
,there are several factors that make
people
 leave their homes and relocate to bigger
cities
due to
economical
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 and educational reasons.
However
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 by improving
this
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these
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 sectors government can contribute
in
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to
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agricultural
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the agricultural
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sphere
 and
futures
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the futures
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 of
this
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these
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 individuals.
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