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In the past, most people used to travel to their place of work. With increased use of computers, the internet and smartphones, more and more people are starting to work from home. What are the advantages and disadvantages of this development?

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Instead
 to travel to
work
 a greater number of
people
 are working
for
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home
 using their computer or some other devices connected to the internet.
Although
this
 has
same
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the same
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majories beneffits
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major benefits
,
their
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 are
also
sames
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some
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drawbacks
, and both will
be consider
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 below. One of the main advantages is that
people
 do not have
spend
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 a large amount of time each day going to
work
 and
then
 back
home
. For many
people
,
this
 can take an hour
our
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or
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 more each way and is a major cause of stress. By not sitting in a car in
trafick
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traffic
, they can not only save time, but avoid stress, and
this
 should make them be
ably
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 to
work
 more effectively.
Morever
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Moreover
, working
for
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home
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 can mean that
people
 have more control over their lives.
In other words
,
people
 in the office often have to make it look like they are working when
real
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 they are just wasting time. At
home
, they have an amount of
work
 they have do to and a deadline. And it is up to them to decide when and how they
complety
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completely
complete
 it.
Nevertheless
, working
for
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home
 can be lonely, not having coworkers to chat and help you out if you have a problem that cannot be
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 online is a serious
disadvantages
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.
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Furthermore
, even if you can contact someone via email, it is often better to
solves
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somes
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some
 problems face-to-face
,
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while
 working in
office
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an office
the office
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,
can
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which can
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creat
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create
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 a team
atmosfere
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atmosphere
that is
 better for
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the produtivity
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produtivity
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productivity
 and success of the company.
Overall
, it
seams
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seems
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 that working from
home
 can make a
workers
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worker's
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 life
easir
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easier
 and give them more control.
However
,
their
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there
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 are some things that are better done with other
people
 around.
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