The maps below show the layout of a university’s sports centre now, and how it will look after redevelopment. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The maps below show the layout of a university’s sports centre now, and how it will look after redevelopment.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The two maps present the design of a higher institution's sports centre,and how it will look after reconstruction.
Overall
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,new structures
such
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as a dance studio ,leisure swimming pool and sports shop will be added to the layout .
Whereas
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,the gym,the reception entrance,the lake and the waiting arena will remain the same. To start with,the current blueprint of the arena contains double outdoor courts,each on the western and eastern part of the building, outside the tank to be precise.The gym and the reception are situated in the northern and southern regions of the design.The layout has just one changing room which is located just outside the swimming area.There is a seating area on the right side of the pond which allows the swimmers to relax.
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, these are the proposed blueprint of the activities building.The courts will be redeveloped into a leisure lake, sports hall and two dance studios on the eastern part.
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,rooms for keeping cloaks and a shop with a cafe will be constructed by the sides of the entrance of the reception.
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, the gym and the size of the bath at the centre of the layout will remain unchanged at 25cm.
This
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proposed plan will be camped
together with
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partitions to each structure.
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