Some people believe that eventually all jobs will be done by artificially intelligent robot. What is your opinion?

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of digital technology, people view that all
professions
will be replaced by artificial intelligent robots. I disagree with
this
view to some
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I will share my opinion in the following discussion.
First,
it is true that many
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of
jobs
have
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been done by
artifical
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artificial
intelligents
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intelligence
intelligent
either
robot
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robots
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or software like the current development of ChatGPT.
However
, those
professions
mostly
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related to technical
jobs
.
In other words
, I believe that AI could only do easy-to-do or technical tasks.
For instance
, we can see a
robot
which acts as a
waitrees
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waitress
, house cleaner
untill
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until
online
news
reader.
Accordingly
, it seems that they could not do some complex
jobs
that need complicated thoughts. A
news
reader,
for example
, only read the
news
which is chosen by
human
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. They only do tasks based on human instruction. Though AI is able to
to
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write and read the
news
,
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the idea beyond the
news
would still be made by
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.
In addition
, human is still necessary to do careers which need
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complex minds linked to
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ideas and strategies. It is
due to
the nature that only human who has a brain and will do some brain-related
jobs
such
as doing logical tasks creating innovations and ideas. In simply, if there is no human who
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the
robot
per se, there is no AI-related job after all. So, We could say that we still play an important role to create
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professions
. Many studies
also
show that despite the increasing number of
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robot
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robots
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which replaced our
works
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, there are some new
jobs
will
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be emerged and
created
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by humans which can only be done by
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themselves
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. In
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conclusion
, it seems to me that there is not always
right
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regarding the change of all
jobs
done by AI because we as a
humanbeing
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human being
is
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still able to create new
professions
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by ourselves.
Thus
, I totally disagree with the statement
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posited
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that all
of
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jobs
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the jobs
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will be changed from human-based
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jobs
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to AI-based
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jobs
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.
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • artificial intelligence
  • automated
  • transformation
  • job market
  • complement
  • human capabilities
  • mundane tasks
  • higher-value work
  • adapting
  • acquiring
  • skills in demand
  • education and training programs
  • evolving job market
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