the graph below shows the average carbon dioxide emiision per person in the countries uk,sweden, italy and portugal between 1967-2007

The graph illustrates the weight of the average CO2

emission

in four countries, the UK, Sweden, Italy, and Portugal, between 1967 and 2007. As can be seen from the line graph, Portugal and Italy share similar

trend

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in Co2

emission

amount

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. The UK always had the largest CO2

emission

amount

during

this

period.

To begin

with, the

emission

of each person in Portugal has slightly increased for 40 years starting from 1967. It moved from 1 metric to 5 metric

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needs to be noticed is that the slope became more stable after 1997. Italian CO2

emission

trend is almost the same, which increased from

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4.1 to 8.

However

, the decrease of emissions per person in the UK reduced from 1967 to 2007, which dropped from

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11 metric

tonners

to 9 metric

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. Turning to the

last

country, Sweden. its CO2

emission

amount

started at 8.2 metric

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in 1967, reached its peak in 1977 and amounted to 11.

Nevertheless

, it continued to

dropped

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down to the bottom

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which

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5.1 metric

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.It is

tnteresting

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to notice that at

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point

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2007. Sweden and Portugal had almost the same

amount

of

emission

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