Many manufactured food and drink products contain high levels of sugar, which causes many health problems. Sugary products should be made more expensive to encourage people to consume less sugar. Do you agree or disagree?

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cause of

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manufactured

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or beverage containing excessive

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, some people argue that raising the

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of manufactured

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will reduce the consumption rate of that goods. I partially agree with

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mechanism as it will bring an immense benefit. It is widely accepted that people are more selective when purchasing an item.

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, making manufactured foods and drinks to be expensive will likely solve the issue. Another point to be considered is

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since

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can be addictive, limiting a person to buy one by setting a higher

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that product will impede the addiction.

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, an expensive carbonated

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priority to

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other products.

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, there are some alternatives that might support the increase in

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of produced

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focusing on getting these items to be expensive will work, the companies of the healthy alternatives should

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lower the

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of their product.

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reckons the market reality that cheaper

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is more attractive regardless of the sold product.

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, people will be attracted to the low-cost

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compared to the expensive yet manufactured ones.

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,

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coverage is the most expensive priority ,

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, every individual tries to avoid it.

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not covering

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due to

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sugar

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might be the most effective solution

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reducing

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consumption per person. In conclusion, increasing the

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of manufactured goods, especially

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drink

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and

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, might contribute to the decrease in

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sugar

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, I hold the view that limiting the

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sugar related

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will have the greatest effect in solving

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issue.