You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. The chart below shows the expenditure on three categories among different age groups of residents in the UK in 2004. Summaries the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. You should write at least 150 words.

You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.

The chart below shows the expenditure on three categories among different age groups of residents in the UK in 2004.

Summaries the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

You should write at least 150 words.
The bar graph illustrates the
amont
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amount
of expenditure which was spent by British
people
from five phases
generation
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in 2004.
Overall
, what stands out from the graph is that
although
the categories for food and drinks and for entertainment gained more popularity from older generations, restaurants and hotels are preferred by younger citizens at the period of time.
To begin
with figures
of
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food and drinks and entertainment, both categories saw more popularity in the
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older age, with the youngest population's proportion at well over 5% and the quadrupled percentage for
the
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people
aged between 61 and 75.
However
,
whereas
their figure presented almost similar tendency in
all
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year group, in the data of above 76 seniors, there were almost half as much spending for recreation activities as for substance and
bevarage
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beverage
.
On the other hand
, expenditure for restaurants and hotels witnessed
different
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trend, which was the most money spent by young
people
aged below 30 at the percentage at approximately 14%. Yet,
while
this
category had a tendency that the popularity for
older
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generation was not as much as
younger's
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the younger's
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, the oldest generation showed the figure at about 6% which was roughly triple
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that
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recorded
by
people
who were between 61 and 75.
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