The map below shows the development of the village of Ryemouth between 1995 and present. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make compatisons where relevant.

The map below shows the development of the village of Ryemouth between 1995 and present.

Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make compatisons where relevant.
The two pictures compare the layout of Ryemouth village in 1995 and today.
Overall
, there are some modifications including addition and renovation for several infrastructures and facilities. By 1995, housing was situated in the north-west
area
of the
map
and along side of the road. In the east
area
of the
map
, it can be seen the farmland and forest park,
while
in the southern
area
of the
map
were located a hotel, cafe, fish market, and shop. The village was
also
completed with a fishing port in the sea that can be seen in the southernmost. At present, the housing
area
is enlarged and the number of house buildings is increased. The farmland is extended and converted into a golf
area
which is completed with a tennis court in the corner,
while
the forest park is cut down. The car park is built in the east of the hotel. Some replacement is found in the southwest
area
of the
map
. The shop is made into a restaurant, the fish market is removed and that location has functioned as an apartment. Today, the fishing port is demolished.
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