There is a good deal of evidence that increasing car use is contributing to global warming and having other undesirable effects on people's health and wellbeing. What can be done to discourage people from using their cars? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience. Write at least 250 words.

The increase in using

cars

leads to global warming and other undesirable effects on people’s health and

wellbeing

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. It shows us that we have to reduce the

use

of

cars

, but what we can do is discourage it.

Cars

are a necessity for people now,so I think that some

transportation

can be used

instead

of

cars

.

This

is because people

use

cars

as the most useful

transportation

, and if there is other

transportation

which is more useful than

cars

, they will

use

it. In Tokyo, people usually

use

trains, because they can access everywhere using trains and it is faster than

cars

.

Therefore

, encouraging the

use

of

transportation

can be the solution. The exhaust gas and Co2 which are produced by

cars

are one of the biggest causes of environmental issues. Exhaust gas affects people’s health badly and the Co2 makes global warming accelerate.

However

, recently, some

car

manufacturers started to produce hybrid

cars

and electric

cars

. Hybrid

cars

are the

car

using petrol and electricity as the energy sources and electric

cars

are the

car

which

use

only electricity as

energy

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source. Hybrid

cars

exhausts

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exhaust

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gas and Co2 only half compared to normal

cars

.

Also

,

the

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electric

cars

don’t exhaust them.

Therefore

, investing

and

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in and

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using the electric

car

are effective ways to solve the problem. Increasing

car

use

is

the

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a

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problem we have to work on a solution. The damage to the environment and human health which is caused by using

cars

is

being

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serious, so we have to consider the solution and actually do it.