There is a good deal of evidence that increasing car use is contributing to global warming and having other undesirable effects on people's health and wellbeing. What can be done to discourage people from using their cars? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience. Write at least 250 words.

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The increase in using
cars
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leads to global warming and other undesirable effects on people’s health and
wellbeing
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. It shows us that we have to reduce the
use
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of
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, but what we can do is discourage it.
Cars
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are a necessity for people now,so I think that some
transportation
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can be used
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of
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This
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is because people
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cars
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as the most useful
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, and if there is other
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which is more useful than
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, they will
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it. In Tokyo, people usually
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trains, because they can access everywhere using trains and it is faster than
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.
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, encouraging the
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of
transportation
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can be the solution. The exhaust gas and Co2 which are produced by
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are one of the biggest causes of environmental issues. Exhaust gas affects people’s health badly and the Co2 makes global warming accelerate.
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, recently, some
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manufacturers started to produce hybrid
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and electric
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. Hybrid
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are the
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using petrol and electricity as the energy sources and electric
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are the
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which
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only electricity as
energy
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source. Hybrid
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exhausts
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gas and Co2 only half compared to normal
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.
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,
the
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electric
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don’t exhaust them.
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, investing
and
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using the electric
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are effective ways to solve the problem. Increasing
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use
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is
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problem we have to work on a solution. The damage to the environment and human health which is caused by using
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is
being
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serious, so we have to consider the solution and actually do it.
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