The diagrams below show the life cycle of a lady bird and its anatomy.
The
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diagrams show the anatomy and the life cycle of a ladybird. Use synonyms
Overall
, all the main body components are named and indicated and Linking Words
also
a brief description of the life journey is reported.
Ladybirds come from small eggs laid on a leaf, that usually need from Linking Words
two
to five Use synonyms
days
to open. The first state that Use synonyms
this
insect passes is the larval one. It keeps Linking Words
this
stage for almost twenty-one Linking Words
days
and Use synonyms
then
it moves to the pupa period. Pupas leave on a leaf for seven Linking Words
days
and, after these Use synonyms
days
, they transform into adult ladybugsUse synonyms
,.
Its being is smaller than the larval step.
These small animals are composed of a head, where there are attached Change the punctuation
,
.
two
eyes and a couple of antennas. Use synonyms
Furthermore
, they have six short legs and a pronotum. Linking Words
Furthermore
, they have Linking Words
two
red elytra, one for each part of the abdomen, with a black pois pattern. Use synonyms
Moreover
, under the elytra, there are Linking Words
two
wings.Use synonyms
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