The diagrams below show the life cycle of a lady bird and its anatomy.
The
two
diagrams show the anatomy and the life cycle of a ladybird. Overall
, all the main body components are named and indicated and also
a brief description of the life journey is reported.
Ladybirds come from small eggs laid on a leaf, that usually need from two
to five days
to open. The first state that this
insect passes is the larval one. It keeps this
stage for almost twenty-one days
and then
it moves to the pupa period. Pupas leave on a leaf for seven days
and, after these days
, they transform into adult ladybugs,.
Its being is smaller than the larval step.
These small animals are composed of a head, where there are attached Change the punctuation
,
.
two
eyes and a couple of antennas. Furthermore
, they have six short legs and a pronotum. Furthermore
, they have two
red elytra, one for each part of the abdomen, with a black pois pattern. Moreover
, under the elytra, there are two
wings.Submitted by linda.marchetto on
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