You have bought tickets for a tour with your friend for the period of your holiday, but you have just discovered that you have to change your plans. Write a letter to him: • Apologize; • Explain the reasons; • Suggest alternative arrangements. Write at least 150 words. You do NOT need to write any addresses. Begin your letter as follows: Dear ....,

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Dear..., I hope you are doing well, I'm writing

this

message to tell you that I'm very sorry I will not be with you during

this

holiday, it is

really

Correct article usage

a really

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shame

Add an article

a shame

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Remove the comma

apply

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after we bought tickets and prepared everything for our holiday, to apologize now, but I have no choice bro, I wish a good vacation there and all best of luck I had to cancel

this

tour because my father has suffered from

unexpected

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an unexpected

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illnes

Correct your spelling

illness

, that's why I changed my plan to travel with him to take the necessary medical check abroad, as you know my friend I'm his older son so I must be with him during

this

critical condition. I have some alternative

suggestion

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suggestions

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, would you mind

to spend

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spending

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the next weekend with me here? I will make a barbeque in my backyard, it will be a nice time because lots of our friends would come over, or if it is possible to delay the tour to the midterm vacation so we can go together. Let me hear from you soon bro. With all love Adam

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The Closing

The style of the letter determine how you have to close it.

Check out the suggested closing sentences for each type of letter in the General IELTS Test. The closing sentence should be the last sentence of your letter.

Formal style (To someone you have not met, whose name you don’t know)

Yours faithfully,

Semi-formal (To someone you may or may not have met, whose last name you know)

Yours sincerely,

Informal (To someone you know well, whose first name you know and use)

Best regards,
Warm wishes,

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Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
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Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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Grammar mistakes
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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 5.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 5.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 5.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

7 paragraphs

178 words

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