Car ownership has increased so rapidly over the past thirty years that many cities in the world are now ‘one big traffic jam.’ How true do you think this statement is? What measures can governments take to discourage people from using their cars

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of ergonomic vehicles like cars and flights

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reached a drastic height after the 21st century. Owning these commodities

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is seen as a social status by many in recent years.

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change in lifestyle

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caused and the steps our governing bodies can take to mitigate its usage. Over-usage of cars

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increased air pollution in the world to a greater

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. To reduce its preference among people, awareness programs with respect to its harmful effects

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our environment should be assisted

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our younger and older generations. If World leaders can encourage

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a hybrid model, might

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successfully reduce the need for travel on a daily basis ,

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reducing traffic rate.

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, the major reason for the introduction of these private vehicles was to reach a destination on

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, but over the years it has lost its main purpose and worldwide humans are wasting one-third of their

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waiting in traffic. In order to resolve these issues, the government should keep strict rules

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for private vehicles and encourage citizens of their country to use public

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of transport to improve their

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. In conclusion, People have become more stringent on their

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and would love to do anything that will increase their productivity and family

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, bringing them the awareness that using public commodity will give them their 6 hours back for a week, which is the

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every human spend getting stuck in traffic on a

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and day-out basis will mitigate the idea of owning cars.