You recently bought a piece of sports equipment from an online store. When you first used the piece of sports equipment, you found a problem with it. Write a letter to teh manager of the online store. In your letter describe the problem with the piece of sports equipment say what happened because of the problem explain what you would like the company to do.

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Dear Sir/Madam, I am writing

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letter to complain about the product that I bought from your E-commerce store

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week.The pair of sports running

shoes

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I bought were not the

size

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that I ordered Online. Since It was mistakenly delivered the wrong

size

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it did not fit me well. Specifically, I ordered 2 pairs because I am going to participate inter-college competition, which is coming next month. When I opened the parcel it seemed quite ok the brand and the colour of the

shoes

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. When I wore those

shoes

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they did not fit me well because of the wrong

size

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Due to

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the wrong delivery of the order, I was not able to wear those

shoes

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on that day. So I would like to receive a refund for my order or if you can arrange to deliver another pair of boots of my

size

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within two days. I am attaching the receipt of the invoice for the order with reference no xw3405th. I look forward to your reply. Yours sincerely, Raghav.

jazz Thu May 18 2023

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 7.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 9.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 9.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

6 paragraphs

172 words

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