Some people believe that students should begin learning a language very early in schoop while others think these subjects should be taught later. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

There have been differing views
whether
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people
should begin learning a
language
very early in school or later. In my following essay, I will discuss both sides of the argument and give my opinion. On the one hand, some
people
think that it is useful for
people
to learn a
language
later. First of all, the main reason is that
people
may have a lot of information during their life and
this
thing helps them to learn the
language
.
For example
,
the
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older
people
take more points in IELTS exams in 2022 than younger candidates.
In addition
,
this
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these
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people
are good learners because they have some effective study habits that make
process
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easier.
On the other hand
, I think that other
people
's opinions
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learning the
language
very early in school
is
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true.
Initially
, students have more powerful
brain
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when they are younger than older.
As a result
, they can memorize the words in
the
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foreign
language
and remember them for a long time.
For example
,
researchs
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research
researches
researchers
show that memorizing and remembering abilities decrease with age by 10%.
Moreover
, children have the only job
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this
ages
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that is
to study and they totally pay attention to learning
language
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the language
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. In conclusion,
although
some
people
's arguments about to learn a
language
later are strong, I believe that early learning is the best way.
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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