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In some countries, the government pays for health care. In others, the individual must pay for their own health care.  Discuss the advantages and disadvantages of each system.

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In a competitive world, these days there are plenty of unhealthy
people
 and there is
need
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a need
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 for
rehab
. I reckon every
person
 cannot afford to
rehab
 and at
this
 time
government
 must help
to
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apply
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the population in
this
 situation if
people
 cannot afford to
rehab
 themselves. I must say that every
person
 has a law to
rehab
. In my opinion,
population
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the population
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 have to
rehab
 themselves on their own. Because,If
government
 help all
people
 are attached to the
government
. I think is awful that's why I reckon
people
 must
rehab
 themselves on their own.
Firstly
,not every
person
 has a chance to pay the hospital's charge in these situations
government
 must pay them their bill. It will be a charity if
government
 help them when they feel difficult.
Nevertheless
, nowadays there are many types of governments that are not honest. Since they see
people
 who feel difficulty but they do not help them. Correctly, not all populations need help, but some of them cannot afford to
rehab
.
On the other hand
, we need to think about the
government
 because we do not think about them easily. Since they have many problems not only yours. That's why we must think that they do not easy. In conclusion, I reckon
government
 have to help a
person
 who felt difficulty if they can. But the population do not keen on to
government
 they have to pay hospital charges.
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