You exercise regularly and have been a member of many different gyms. Recently, you moved into a new neighbourhood and joined a new gym. You have noticed that people at this gym do not bother to wipe down the machines after use and often leave dirty towels on the benches in the changing rooms. Write to the gym manager. In your letter: explain who you are describe the problem exactly make suggestions to improve the gym

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Dear Mr. Tom, My name is Sinan. I am writing to you to report some issues in your gym. I recently moved to
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beautiful city and started looking for a place to exercise.
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, I heard so many good reviews about your gym that I decided to become a member of your club.
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, a month ago, I enrolled myself in
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gym.
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, I really like the infrastructure, types of workout equipment, and space to perform physical activities.
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, I started noticing that some people, after practising, leave the exercise machines covered in sweat patches and do not even wipe out these machines, especially the benches and seats, after using them. The second thing that comes into concern is that a few members leave the changing rooms unhygienic after using them,
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, by forgetting the used towels on the benches rather than throwing them in the laundry basket.
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, these situations are happening at a concerning level, and I would appreciate it if the management would apply the rules strictly and punish the culprit. Thank you in advance for your time and consideration. Yours sincerely, Sinan Y
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