You recently did a short cookery course. The cookery school has asked for your feedback on this course.

Dear Sir or Madam, I would like to thank your school for organizing
such
a memorable and useful
cookery
course
, concerning Italian cuisine, and leave my feedback about it. First of all, our chef, who has conducted the
course
, was incredible. Not only is he a professional, but
also
a charming and charismatic Italian, that has increased my involvement in the
cookery
process. He has shared with us diverse secrets of making pasta and sauces and even a family receipt of tiramisu! I
also
want to thank the whole
course
team for the convenience of studying,
in particular
for the organized space and products.
This
course
is very inspiring for homemade food, as we have covered all types of dishes and received a detailed
cookery
book. The chef encouraged me to cook hand-made pasta, which I had never considered before. Now I got used to doing it almost every week and give away my product to parents and friends. I believe that you have to continue a series of courses devoted to the traditional cuisine of different countries. I would like to enrol on French and German food courses,
for example
. As of now, I will definitely recommend your
cookery
school to anyone who does not want to pay for restaurant food, but to make real culinary masterpieces by themselves! Yours faithfully, Maria Ryzhikova
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