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People nowadays tend to have children at a older age Do the advantage outweigh the disadvantage

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Nowadays, married couples tend to give birth at an older age, which might be
due-to
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preparation of the parents for the process,
however
, delay in the ability to conceive can
also
 be a disadvantage which I believe outweighs the disadvantages which can be medically corrected.
Firstly
, many couples nowadays believe that childbirth and child care are not a small deal,
that is
 why some people want to prepare either emotionally or financially towards having their child.
For instance
, I once had a neighbour who was a man at the age of 35 and still not married, so I asked him one day his reason for that and he said he doesn’t want his wife or offspring to lack anything whatsoever and that it’s after he made it by having a house and a car with a steady income and most people importantly he wanted to be emotionally ready to have a child and get married till he does so, which I think it’s a good idea
due to
 the fact that he wanted to be emotionally grounded before heading into it.
However
, the inability of the woman to conceive can be a great emotional stress and
also
 causes depression in the long run, but
this
 can be corrected in some ways.
For example
, I once had a patient who was not able to get pregnant for five years of marriage, many texts were done
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 both the wife and her husband which all came out good but was still not able to have a baby. Later on, the physician suggested surrogacy which came out well and they had a twin. So,
this
 can be corrected medically. In conclusion,
although
 giving birth at an older age can be risky
due to
 some medical issues, I believe the advantage supersedes the disadvantage because it reduces the stress of coping with children and
also
 to Cater for their children. 320 words 1hr15mins
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