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People nowadays tend to have children at older ages. Do the advantages of this outweigh the disadvantages

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Recently many
folks
 decide to give
birth
 in their old
age
due to
 financial independence and maturity to cope with the stress that comes with childbearing thou there is
infertility
 and congenital abnormality which are common among older ones There are benefits that come with giving
birth
 at old
age
that is
 more than disadvantages, I will expatiate on these in my upcoming paragraphs with relevant examples
To begin
 with, older
people
 are financially capable to cope with any financial challenges that come with childbearing without looking up to family for assistance unlike the young
folks
, they give quality and adequate care needed for the children, more so they are physically,and emotionally rally and psychologically mature to cope with the stress that comes with childbearing, their reproductive system to is mature for childbearing, moving on older
folks
 are mature enough to ensure discipline and training of their children
due to
 experience compared to younger ones.
Furthermore
, in as much there are benefits of giving
birth
 at an older
age
, it comes with some challenges too, there is a high rate of
infertility
 in older
folks
due to
 hormonal imbalance,
also
 the level of congenital abnormality is common in
people
 of older
folks
 compare to young
folks
 and secondary
infertility
 is another issue with old
people
 too. In conclusion,
people
 give
birth
 in old
age
 because financial independence and maturity which are necessary for childbearing is lacking in younger
people
while
 the negative effects are
infertility
, and congenital abnormalities which are not common in young
folks
.
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