People nowadays tend to have children at older ages. Do the advantages outweigh the disadvantages

In present times, some folks prefer to give birth to their young ones when they have advanced in age.
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them with
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of being financially and mentally stable to care for
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,it is not without some demerits. Certain medical conditions can be complicated with age.
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menopause at a stage in life is inevitable.
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with,
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process predisposes the
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system to certain disease conditions.
Similarly
, pregnancy involves both physical and hormonal changes. Hypertension in older adults
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likely to be more serious with cyesis and can cause preeclamptic toxaemia leading
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the risk
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the mother,
child
or both during pregnancy, labour or delivery.
Furthermore
, the offspring can develop congenital abnormality from degenerative conditions in the
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genes.
For instance
,a couple got married in their early adulthood but decided not the have children until she was 40 years. The woman
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was
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was
diagnosed
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with severe hypertension at the age of 38. She
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got pregnant at 40 years but died at
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due to
complications of severe hypertension. Notwithstanding, the idea of being psychologically and financially prepared to bring forth fruits is paramount. The parents will be prepared to provide the basic amenities for their young ones without hurdles.
For example
. A young lady in my
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graduated from the University,secured a
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job and bought a house on
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. She saved enough money before she got married . They both decided to have a
child
when she was 45 years. They could afford the best medical attention and she delivered a baby. The
child
had the best of his childhood, attended the best school and graduated from the University with
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distinction. He had everything he needed. In conclusion,it is important to
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bring forth your youngsters as an older adult after acquiring the required means to provide comfort and nurture them.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • delayed parenting
  • maternal/paternal age
  • biological clock
  • career establishment
  • financial stability
  • physical stamina
  • emotional maturity
  • health risks
  • generation gap
  • work-life balance
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