The map shows Southside, a shopping mall, as it is now, and plans for its development. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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map displays a shopping centre, Southside in its present form and the other, showcases its future renovations. There will be an expansion of the shopping complex

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the golf course, the

park

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and the fitness centre will be demolished. The planned developments

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include a proposed addition of new

stores

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. Currently, the mall has just one entrance . Going forward, directly across the entryway, the Cafe can be found,

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then

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ahead, is the play area. Adjacent to

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, is the Noodle shop and next to it,

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the Cinemas. Moving eastward from the door, the first

store

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to encounter is the supermarket and the door after the supermarket leads to the restroom. The department

store

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can be seen on the east side of the mall sharing boundaries with the Cinemas and the restroom. A car

park

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is located outside the shopping complex

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the next building houses the gym. The open field is where the Golf Course and

Park

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are situated.

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the renovation plans, the shopping complex will be expanded occupying the open field

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the golf club and

park

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will be demolished. The car

park

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will

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be made bigger displacing the fitness center. Inside the mall itself, there will be new

stores

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such

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as a beauty

store

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, two shoe

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, a cosmetics

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, a gift shop and three fashion

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but the supermarket, the toilet and the entry will maintain their original location. The Cafe will be replaced with the info centre. The department will remain, increasing in size and acquiring its own gate.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words park, stores, store with synonyms.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Introduction & conclusion present

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 7.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 4.0

Complete response

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4 paragraphs

259 words

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The map shows Southside, a shopping mall, as it is now, and plans for its development. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

Living in a country where you have to speak a foreign language can cause serious problems, as well as practical problems. To what extand do you agree or disagree with this statemant?

Individual greed and selfishness have been the basis of modern society. Some people think that we must return to older more traditional values such as respect for the local community in order to create a better world to live in. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Recent advances in air travel have focused only on those sitting in upper class and have left other passengers with no benefits. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Some people think that job satisfaction is more important than job security. Others think that people cannot expect to enjoy a job and that having a permanent job is more important. Discuss both views and give your opinion.