The map shows Southside, a shopping mall, as it is now, and plans for its development. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The map shows Southside, a shopping mall, as it is now, and plans for its development. 

Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
This
map displays a shopping centre, Southside in its present form and the other, showcases its future renovations. There will be an expansion of the shopping complex
while
the golf course, the
park
and the fitness centre will be demolished. The planned developments
also
include a proposed addition of new
stores
. Currently, the mall has just one entrance . Going forward, directly across the entryway, the Cafe can be found,
then
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and then
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ahead, is the play area. Adjacent to
this
, is the Noodle shop and next to it,
is
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the Cinemas. Moving eastward from the door, the first
store
to encounter is the supermarket and the door after the supermarket leads to the restroom. The department
store
can be seen on the east side of the mall sharing boundaries with the Cinemas and the restroom. A car
park
is located outside the shopping complex
while
the next building houses the gym. The open field is where the Golf Course and
Park
are situated.
According to
the renovation plans, the shopping complex will be expanded occupying the open field
while
the golf club and
park
will be demolished. The car
park
will
also
be made bigger displacing the fitness center. Inside the mall itself, there will be new
stores
such
as a beauty
store
, two shoe
stores
, a cosmetics
store
, a gift shop and three fashion
stores
but the supermarket, the toilet and the entry will maintain their original location. The Cafe will be replaced with the info centre. The department will remain, increasing in size and acquiring its own gate.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words park, stores, store with synonyms.
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