The map shows Southside, a shopping mall, as it is now, and plans for its development. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

IELTS Writing Task Chart for The map shows Southside, a shopping mall, as it is now, and plans for its development. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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This

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map displays a shopping centre, Southside in its present form and the other, showcases its future renovations. There will be an expansion of the shopping complex

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the golf course, the

park

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and the fitness centre will be demolished. The planned developments

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include a proposed addition of new

stores

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. Currently, the mall has just one entrance . Going forward, directly across the entryway, the Cafe can be found,

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then

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ahead, is the play area. Adjacent to

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, is the Noodle shop and next to it,

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the Cinemas. Moving eastward from the door, the first

store

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to encounter is the supermarket and the door after the supermarket leads to the restroom. The department

store

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can be seen on the east side of the mall sharing boundaries with the Cinemas and the restroom. A car

park

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is located outside the shopping complex

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the next building houses the gym. The open field is where the Golf Course and

Park

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are situated.

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the renovation plans, the shopping complex will be expanded occupying the open field

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the golf club and

park

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will be demolished. The car

park

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will

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be made bigger displacing the fitness center. Inside the mall itself, there will be new

stores

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such

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as a beauty

store

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, two shoe

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, a cosmetics

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, a gift shop and three fashion

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but the supermarket, the toilet and the entry will maintain their original location. The Cafe will be replaced with the info centre. The department will remain, increasing in size and acquiring its own gate.

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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "also, while".

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Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.

Basic structure: Change the second paragraph.

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Basic structure: Change the third paragraph.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words park, stores, store with synonyms.

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Vocabulary: Only 4 basic words for charts were used.

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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.

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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the third paragraph.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Introduction & conclusion present

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 7.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 4.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

4 paragraphs

259 words

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The map shows Southside, a shopping mall, as it is now, and plans for its development. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

Workers are more satisfied when they have many different types of tasks to do during the workday than when they do similar tasks all day long. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.

Many high street shops have gone out of business in recent years. Why do you think this has happened? Is it a positive or negative development?

Some people think that planning for the future is a waste of time. They believe it is more important to focus on the present. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Now it is easy to apply for and be given a credit card. However, some people experience problems when they are not be able to pay their debts back. In your opinion, do advantages of credit card outweight the disadventages?