The two pie charts below show the online shopping sales for retail sectors in Canada in 2005 and 2010. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words. (20 mins.)
These 2 charts illustrate the
difference
of
proportion in each Change preposition
in
part
of things that was
bought online between 2005 and 2010. Each Change the verb form
were
part
is included with electronics
& appliances
, food & beverage, home
furnishings
and video
games
.
Overall
, it was noticeable that the amount of online sales in the food & beverage part
in 2010 had significantly increased from 2005 about 10% come
Verb problem
apply
along with
video
games
about 5%. In
contrast
the Add a comma
contrast,
number
in
Change preposition
of
home
furnishings
in 2010 decreased a lot compared to 2005 about 10% moreover
electronics
& appliances
which was the part
that had most
percentage in 2005 Correct word choice
the highest
also
decreased about
5%Change preposition
by about
too
.
In 2005, we could tell that Rephrase
apply
electronics
& appliances
had a huge difference
in sales from the second and third about 10% and 13% respectively. In the last
place, it was video
games
that had the largest difference
from the first about 17%.
In 2010, there was a bit of difference
between number
one that
was Correct pronoun usage
which
home
furnishings
and number
two that
was Correct pronoun usage
which
electronics
& appliances
. It was only 2%. But there was some serious difference
in percentage
of Add an article
the percentage
number
3 that
was Correct pronoun usage
which
video
games
and number
4 that
was Correct pronoun usage
which
home
furnishings
from number
2 that
was 9% and 17% respectively.Correct pronoun usage
apply
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Vocabulary: Replace the words difference, part, electronics, appliances, home, furnishings, video, games, number with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "difference" was used 5 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "decreased" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "about" was used 6 times.
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