The diagram below shows the water cycle, which is the continuous movement of water on, above and below the surface of the Earth

The diagram below shows the water cycle, which is the continuous movement of water on, above and below the surface of the Earth
The diagram describes the
water
cycle and its lasting motion on, above and below the surface of the planet Earth. We can see from the illustration is
water
passes through several changes of its form: evaporation, transferring of vapours by air flows, condensing, falling on the ground (in the form of rain, snow and etc.) and flowing
water
in spring, lakes and
ocean
. First of all,
water
evaporates from
ocean
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, which gives about 80% of
overall
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water
vapour in
air
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.
It
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then
, the condensed
water
vapour becomes a cloud formation.
Then
after
cloud
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the cloud
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is formated, it falls in the shape of
percipitation
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precipitation
on the ground, lakes and picks. The liquid on the surface runs into the lake and
ocean
and some part penetrates into groundwater up to
impervious
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layer and channels through
salt
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saltwater
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water
intrusion
to
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ocean
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the ocean
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. In general,
water
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the water
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cycle involves many processes which are essential parts of nature as it supports all nature inhabitants and
ecosystem
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ecosystems
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on the planet.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase your introduction. Words match: 69%.
Vocabulary: Replace the words water, ocean with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "undefined" in your introduction.
Vocabulary: Only 6 basic words for charts were used.
Vocabulary: The word "fall" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the fourth paragraph.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • evaporation
  • transpiration
  • condensation
  • precipitation
  • aquifers
  • percolation
  • surface runoff
  • replenishing
  • infiltrates
  • atmosphere
  • vapor
  • liquid
  • cycle
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