Some people prefer to plan activities for their free time very carefully. Others choose not to make any plans at all for their free time. Compare the benefits of planning free-time activities with the benefits of not making plans. Which do you prefer-planning or not planning for youe leisure time?
certain
people
choose to not have any plans when they have their free time
, while
others plan
their free time
very carefully. This
essay will elaborate Change preposition
on this
this ideas
.
Making plans for our activities during free Change the determiner
this idea
these ideas
time
is a good thing, because we are going to know what should be done in our free time
, and our free time
will be more meaningful. For instance
, some people
make a program about working out in his
free Correct pronoun usage
their
time
. with this
program
they will be healthier, or even better they got their goals like gaining a Add a comma
,program
six pack
. So, planning is positive because it will be important for us.
Add a hyphen
six-pack
On the other hand
, some groups prefer to not make any plans while
having free time
. it is not always bad,
when we do not have any Remove the comma
apply
plan
. However
, it is more relaxed without a plan
, because, when people
have a plan
, they insist on doing it all in a certain time
, but in contrast
, without a plan
people
do not have things that are obligatory, so they do what they want directly and finish it at that time
. For instance
, people
who do not have a specific plan
during free
Correct pronoun usage
their free
time
want to workout
, so they just Correct your spelling
work out
workout
at that Correct your spelling
work out
time
, unlike people
who have a program that workout everyday
. So, without a Replace the word
every day
plan
, it is more relaxed, and people
do not need a plan
to have valuable time
.
In conclusion, I believe that a plan
is a good thing and it is better to have it, but I would prefer to spend my leisure time
without a plan
and do whatever I want directly. So, even though having a plan
is better, at least I got what I wanted, which is serenity, and a bit of benefits
from my free Change to a singular noun
benefit
time
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite