The chart below shows the annual water usage by different industries.

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The given chart portrays the number of annual

water

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usage

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by different industries.

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, an

industry

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that uses the highest of

water

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usage

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(Groundwaterwater and public supply) is the chemical

industry

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. The lowest

industry

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that takes groundwater and public supplies for their

usage

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are machinery, fuel, and textile

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with, chemicals use groundwater as much as 430. The second rank is metal at 240.

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the paper uses 190 groundwater, followed by food/drinks at 110. Textile will be next with 80 and

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of fuel

industry

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is 70. The lowest

usage

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is for machinery just 10.

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, chemicals use public supply

water

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as much as 240, which is the highest. Followed by food/drinks is 190. The machinery is the third of using public supply. Next is metal, take the

water

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from public supply 90. Next is paper at 20 and for fuel, the paper takes 10 from the public supply.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Introduction & conclusion present

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 6.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 4.0

Complete response

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4 paragraphs

151 words

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The chart below shows the annual water usage by different industries.

Violence in playgrounds is increasing. However, it is important that parents should teach children not to hit back at bullies. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

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