the graph compare the number of train passengers and percentage of train running on time from 1995 to 2004.

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passengers

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running on time between 1995 to 2004.

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increased from 1995 to 2001 before

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from 2002 to 2004. The highest

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was in 2001. The lowest percentage of trains running on time was in 20014.

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in 1995 started at 250% and slightly increased to 260% in 199. The proportion extremely increased to 300 which

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highest. The percentage

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to 280 and experienced stability in three years (2002, 2003, 2004). The second graph depicts

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1995 the percentage of trains running was 92%, the

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declined to 86% in 1997. In 1997 the

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rose to 92% and slightly increased to 93%. The proportion fell to 85% in 2000.

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2000 to 2002 the

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rose to 93% and extremely declined to 72% in 2004.