the graph compare the number of train passengers and percentage of train running on time from 1995 to 2004.

the graph compare the number of train passengers and percentage of train running on time from 1995 to 2004.
The given graph depicts the proportion and the
number
of
train
passengers
of
train
running on time between 1995 to 2004.
Overall
, the
number
of
passengers
increased from 1995 to 2001 before
declined
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from 2002 to 2004. The highest
number
of
train
passengers
was in 2001. The lowest percentage of trains running on time was in 20014.
To begin
with, the
number
of
train
passengers
in 1995 started at 250% and slightly increased to 260% in 199. The proportion extremely increased to 300 which
the
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is the
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highest. The percentage
was fell
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to 280 and experienced stability in three years (2002, 2003, 2004). The second graph depicts
in
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that in
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1995 the percentage of trains running was 92%, the
percentages
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percentage
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declined to 86% in 1997. In 1997 the
number
rose to 92% and slightly increased to 93%. The proportion fell to 85% in 2000.
In
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From
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2000 to 2002 the
number
rose to 93% and extremely declined to 72% in 2004.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase your introduction. Words match: 70%.
Vocabulary: Replace the words number, train, passengers with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "graph" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "depicts" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 4 times.
Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 4 times.
Vocabulary: The word "proportion" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "declined" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "fell" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 4 times.
Vocabulary: The word "slightly" was used 2 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • train passengers
  • train punctuality
  • on time
  • trend
  • period
  • significant changes
  • growth
  • decline
  • correlation
  • contrasts
  • milestones
  • economic conditions
  • infrastructure
  • transport policy
  • customer satisfaction
  • implications
  • prediction
  • environment
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