Studies show that many people in the prison have low level of education. For this reason, some people believe that the best way to reduce crime is to educate in prison, so that they can get a job when they leave prison. To what extent do you agree.

Most of the prisons around the world have

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of prisoners who are confined for one

crime

case or the other,

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it is supposed by people that

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the best way is to ensure formal learning so that they would get

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a job

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job

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after they leave the prison,

therefore

in my opinion

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it is agreed that

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theory should be emphasized,

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essay will pinpoint the reasons. In the world today, there is an increased

crime

rate,

this

sometimes could be

as a result

of low educational level or joblessness

while

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lenient.

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, the best way to curb

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in

the

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society the government should provide vocational jobs in correctional

centers

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and prison yards,

moreover

to maintain the stipulated agenda tutors are assigned to ensure that knowledge is inculcated.

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, there was a program I viewed whereby the

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agency in my country enforced a programme called “Change Overview” in one of the prisons where skills are taught.

Furthermore

,

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discrimating

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discriminating

offences in the country, people

also

must be on deck to put the constitutional law into action.

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crime

rate in

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society, prisoners must

also

be taught how to read and write because teaching them only the skills and not

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conversant with their words or how to write might affect how they relate with their customers after they start up

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and

also

government should provide them with jobs and help them start-up their various career. In conclusion, more effort should be in place so that making

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proposal a notch, thereby making

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society a better place to stay.

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be in

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that

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, government parastatals and individuals should provide vocational training like tailoring, hairstyling and so on

into

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the law enforcement

agent

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such

as the police schemes thereby instigating

crime

rate

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the country.