The maps compare the different of the town name Youngsville in New Zealand over the period of 25 years starting from 1980

The maps compare the different of the town name Youngsville in New Zealand over the period of 25 years starting from 1980
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of the town name Youngsville in New Zealand over the period of 25 years starting from 1980 It can be seen that many trees were chopped down to make space for
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and public places.
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a few houses were replaced by a railway. First of all, a new stadium and car park were built on the Northern side of the hospital. A number of the trees were removed around the hospital to build a park with facilities
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as golfing, fishing and swimming. In 1980, the houses and trees near the school were replaced by warehouses.
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, in order to accommodate the growing population, most of the landed houses were demolished and replaced by skyscrapers by 2005 In 2005, the railway was extended all the way up to the north direction, next to the newly constructed stadium and parking space. A new marina was built next to the railway station.
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