The maps compare the different of the town name Youngsville in New Zealand over the period of 25 years starting from 1980
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First of all, a new stadium and car park were built on the Northern side of the hospital. A number of the trees were removed around the hospital to build a park with facilities such
as golfing, fishing and swimming. In 1980, the houses and trees near the school were replaced by warehouses. Also
, in order to accommodate the growing population, most of the landed houses were demolished and replaced by skyscrapers by 2005
In 2005, the railway was extended all the way up to the north direction, next to the newly constructed stadium and parking space. A new marina was built next to the railway station.Submitted by joyce.ta213 on
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