The maps show changes that took place in Youngsville in New Zealand over a 25-year period from 1980 to 2005.
The two maps illustrate the landscape changes that occurred in Youngsville, New Zealand over a period of 25 years starting from 1980.
Overall
, the majority of greenery and houses were demolished to make way for commercial and residential buildings throughout the 25-year duration.
A new stadium and car parking lots were constructed on the top right-hand corner of the area. Linking Words
In addition
, most trees around the central part were chopped down to build a park. To the southwest across the river bank, houses and trees near a school were replaced by warehouses. There was Linking Words
also
a significant development regarding housing, with skyscrapers being erected after the removal of landed houses.
The extension of the railway can be observed obviously in 2005 as the railway was extended up to the end of the northern area, next to the newly built stadium. Linking Words
This
plan was proposed and completed to facilitate city transportation from the south to the north.Linking Words
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