The diagram below shows the water recycle, which is the continuous movement of water on, above and below the surface the Earth

The diagram below shows the water recycle, which is the continuous movement of water on, above and below the surface the Earth
IELTS Writing Task Chart for The diagram below shows the water recycle, which is the continuous movement of water on, above and below the surface the Earth
The picture illustrates how
water
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passes from sea to air to land during the natural process known as the
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cycle. It can be seen that
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process consists of three main steps. First of all, seawater evaporates,
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falls as rain and eventually returns to the ocean. Beginning at the evaporation stage, it can see that 80% of the
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vapor
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in the air comes from the oceans.
Water
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from the oceans that would be heated by the sun meets cold air and condenses to form clouds. In the second stage, They accumulate more and more and fall on what is called "precipitation" on the chart.
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, depending on the temperature the
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falls as rain or snow down mountains, plains, rivers, and lakes. In the next step, rainwater may transform into different kinds of pathways. It might fall into lakes or become snow caps on mountains.
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, some of the
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reaches the impervious layer in the ground and some runs on the surface.
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, saltwater intrusion is shown to take place just before groundwater passes into the oceans to complete the cycle.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words water with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "falls" was used 4 times.
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