Some people think that physical strength is important for success in sport, while other people think that mental strength is more important. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

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more success in

sports

,

while

some people believe that it is more crucial to cultivate your mentality than physicality, others argue that physical

health

is more vital for

athletes

. In

this

paper, I will discuss both viewpoints in-depth and present examples to show why the latter assertion is more compelling. On the one hand, sportsmen have to train their mental

health

to compete with every mental issue that they may suffer.

Firstly

, they need to surpass themselves to reach higher achievements. In many situations, they may feel stressed or depressed when they need to surpass their highest records to reach new ones.

Thus

, if they do not have enough motivation, they may give up and completely lose themselves.

In contrast

, they can reach their aims if they have enough enthusiasm and easily gain better achievements in their fields.

Secondly

, there are many disappointments and failures that they have to suffer, so they need to have a sustainable mentality to get

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.

Otherwise

, Many criticized comments are received and they need to overcome all of them and continue to focus on new targets.

For example

, the Vietnamese men's football club lost the final match 2 years ago,

nevertheless

, they overcame that failure and become the winner of that league in the

last

year.

On the other hand

, I believe that physicality is the basis for every success in

sport

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.

While

mental

health

help

athletes

to have a sustainable attitude,

sports

achievements firmly base on sportsmen's physical

health

. The main reason would be to rise their physical strength to compete with other competitors in

sports

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. To become the winner, they need to train physically and improve their experience through many training courses in

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long term.

As a result

, they have enough physical standards to compete and reach as a higher achievement as possible, weightlifting and Karatedo could be feasible instances

for

this

reason.

Moreover

, many competitions are based on

athletes

' weight and

health

to separate them into suitable articles, which means they need to have

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robust physical

health

to win against others who have similarities in terms of

health

and become the winner. In conclusion,

while

mental

health

help

athletes

to surpass themselves and overcome disappointments and failures that they have to suffer, I concur that physical strength is more critical for sportsmen

due to

physicality is the basic factor for every success in

sports