Some people think that physical strength is important for success in sport, while other people think that mental strength is more important. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

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more success in

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some people believe that it is more crucial to cultivate your mentality than physicality, others argue that physical

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is more vital for

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. In

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paper, I will discuss both viewpoints in-depth and present examples to show why the latter assertion is more compelling. On the one hand, sportsmen have to train their mental

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to compete with every mental issue that they may suffer.

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, they need to surpass themselves to reach higher achievements. In many situations, they may feel stressed or depressed when they need to surpass their highest records to reach new ones.

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, if they do not have enough motivation, they may give up and completely lose themselves.

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, they can reach their aims if they have enough enthusiasm and easily gain better achievements in their fields.

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, there are many disappointments and failures that they have to suffer, so they need to have a sustainable mentality to get

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.

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, Many criticized comments are received and they need to overcome all of them and continue to focus on new targets.

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, the Vietnamese men's football club lost the final match 2 years ago,

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, they overcame that failure and become the winner of that league in the

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year.

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, I believe that physicality is the basis for every success in

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mental

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help

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to have a sustainable attitude,

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achievements firmly base on sportsmen's physical

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. The main reason would be to rise their physical strength to compete with other competitors in

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event

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. To become the winner, they need to train physically and improve their experience through many training courses in

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long term.

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, they have enough physical standards to compete and reach as a higher achievement as possible, weightlifting and Karatedo could be feasible instances

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, many competitions are based on

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' weight and

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to separate them into suitable articles, which means they need to have

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robust physical

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to win against others who have similarities in terms of

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and become the winner. In conclusion,

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mental

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help

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to surpass themselves and overcome disappointments and failures that they have to suffer, I concur that physical strength is more critical for sportsmen

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physicality is the basic factor for every success in

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