Some people think that environmental problems should be solved on a global scale while others believe it is better to deal with them nationally. Discuss both sides and give your opinion.

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There has been a significant divergence of opinion revolving around whether environmental
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must deal with locally.
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, some believe that these problems should be made globally. I agree with the latter and I think any ecological issue should be addressed by means of an international community.
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essay will examine both views. On the one hand, the government of a
country
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should be responsible for
their
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ecological welfare of
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country
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and should
endeavor
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to solve any local environmental
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on its own initiative. The reason behind
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is that it can help
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to get to know
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own capabilities and
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prepares and strengthen them for future cases.
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,
Nigerian
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the Nigerian
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government in 2013 was able to fight and eradicate the Ebola disease without any support.
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, it increased the
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’s recognition worldwide and
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some
countries
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seek the assistance of Nigeria whenever there is an epidemic.
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, there would be reduced debts for
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do not call for help abroad since it usually requires much funding.
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, any environmental
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may affect
neighboring
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countries
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or even the whole world. So,
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outside help can not be neglected in order to maintain
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global
wellbeing
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. To illustrate, inner ecological problems of a
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can worsen the health condition of local people which would reduce the
labor
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force and
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there would be
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effect on the economy of the
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.
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, the
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would have
lower
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capacity to produce and import goods and
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considering that many
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are connected with each other foreign trade will be affected. Another reason for the necessity of global efforts against ecological
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is the preservation of multinational health. Drawing from
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of
COVID-19
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pandemic challenges which were experienced by people in 2021 I firmly believe that cooperative work between
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is needed.
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, despite the debate on whether ecological
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should be solved by local government or worldwide actions, I suppose that being involved in solution finding process for
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problem
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problems
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of other
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as well is
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an essential
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decision in order to support not only the world economy but
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international health and sustainable future.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • international cooperation
  • sovereign rights
  • Paris Agreement
  • climate change
  • ocean pollution
  • collective measures
  • economic interests
  • political will
  • enforcement issues
  • free-riders
  • tailor-made solutions
  • transboundary pollution
  • resource constraints
  • global frameworks
  • national efforts
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