the graph below shows the populations in india and china since the year of 2000and predicts populations growth untill 2050.

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chart , which compares (in

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) the

population

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two Asian countries over 50 years period ending in 2050.

Overall

, it can be clearly seen that

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the number of individuals in China is in

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during the given period. India’s

population

is in

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exponential growth

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half a decade. In more

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, in 2000, the

population

of India was one billion and started to increase sharply reaching almost 1.45

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in 2030 and outraced China.

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the end of the period, it is predicted to hit

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peak

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billions

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by the end of 2050.

However

, China’s

population

was approximately 1.25

billions

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in 2000 and the number of citizens was increasing dramatically until the year

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2030 when the

population

was nearly 1.45

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at its peak.

Furthermore

, by 2030 the Chinese society began to decrease gradually and it is predicted to fall to 1.4

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in 2050.