The chart shows the average number of hours each day that Chinese, American, Turkish and Brazilian tourists spent doing leisure activities while on holiday in Greece in August 2019. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words

The chart shows the average number of hours each day that Chinese, American, Turkish and Brazilian tourists spent doing leisure activities while on holiday in Greece in August 2019.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

Write at least 150 words
The given bar charts illustrate how
tourists
from four countries, namely China, America, Turkey and Brazil distributed their time in leisure activities
while
visiting Greece in 2019.
Overall
,
according to
the chart reading books and going to the beach are the two most popular activities among
tourists
,
whereas
visiting places ranks
last
in every nationality. In more detail, literature is beyond popular among Chinese people since they dedicate
one
-third of their day to reading books. Reading books is the number
one
option
also
for Americans that spend around five hours ,
whereas
ranks as the second favourite activity in Turkey and Brazil.
On the other hand
,Brazilian and Turkish
tourists
prefer going to the beach , which is accounted for approximately 6 and 5 hours per day respectively.
Moreover
, there is little difference between the average time that American and Chinese travellers spend on the beach by a narrow margin of
one
hour,( 3 and 4).
Last
but not least,sightseeing is the least common activity accumulating a maximum of three hours per day for Turkish and American citizens , around
one
and a half for Brazilian
tourists
and less than
one
hour for Chinese travellers.
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