Writing task 1 You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. The diagram below shows how solar panels can be used to provide electricity for domestic use. Write a report for a university, lecturer describing the information shown below. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant. You should write at least 150 words.
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The following illustration depicts the working mechanism of solar panels and how they can provide electricity for domestic consumption.
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, it can be noticed that the process is made of 5 steps , beginning at the absorption of sunlight energy and ending at the utility grid which serves as a power bank.
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with , sun rays are passed throughout the solar panels which Linking Words
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turn the light into a DC current ,next comes the role of the inverter which works as a converter that shifts DC to AC currents , Linking Words
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, it controls how electricity is produced , Linking Words
finally
, the electrical panel distributes the electric force to the house .
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have two utility gadgets , namely , the utility grid and meter , the first works on providing power when the amount of solar power used is more than what is produced , and the other , works as a checkpoint between both the house and the grid .Linking Words
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