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Some people believe they should keep all the money they have earned and should not pay tax to the state. Do you agree or disagree?

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It is generally argeed that most
people
 belive that paying taxes is a deety and a contribution to society.
However
 others view that paying tax is not crucial. I partially agree with
this
 opinion. Firt of all some
people
 think that
people
 shoud not pay
taxs
 to the society,who
people
 do not have though know ledgi:about spend to keep
taxs
.
While
people
 is learned about how to spend to
taxs
money
 by
government
, in the majority of the cases,
people
 think that only right think because of a lot of understanding. Maybe,
people
 belive that we earn
money
 hardly and why we should pay tax to state,
however
 it is not true. As I said above, we try to keep all the
money
 hard, similarty, spent tax It self problems and we find what kind of benefit.
Nevertheless
 citezens should be obliged to pay taxes to the
government
 for a number of reasons. They should accept that the
taxs
 they pay help the
government
 offer them the public service all over the
country
.
This
 public services are
this
such
 as: the construction of roads bridges public hospitals, parks and public services. The some
taxs
money
 helps the
country
's economy to be stable, throw
taxs
 the
government
 can
also
 pay off it is debts. In conclution , even though many
people
 think that they should not pay
taxs
 that
money
 is useful to the stability of any
country
. There fore,
people
 should not avoid paying taxes as It may offect the
country
's economy and services that It provides
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • contribute
  • welfare
  • public services
  • progressive taxation
  • distribution of wealth
  • civic duty
  • social cohesion
  • tax evasion
  • economic disparities
  • social unrest
  • individual rights
  • societal responsibilities
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