Some children spend hours every day on their smartphones. Why is this the case? Do you think this is a positive or a negative development?

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using

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daily. There are some reasons and I believe that

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trend has demerits.

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with, some factors are responsible for

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tendency.

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, most

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lack the ability to control themselves. Today, a lot of stimulating

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are available that

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can access via

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,

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generally do not possess the ability to manage their

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well and control themselves.

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leads to them spending unnecessary

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on the internet.

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, easy accessibility to portable

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is another cause for

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trend. Unlike

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past, from a young age, people are using various electronic

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such

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as laptops, tablets and including

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. In my opinion,

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tendency seems negative to me. First of all, overusing

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may be harmful

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children

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.

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, we encourage

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to exercise for their health. Getting exercise plays an important role

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the development of

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. But they may lose physical movement if they spend too much

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on

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electronic

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.

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, there is a danger of information inaccuracy. As the accessibility to phones increasingly rises,

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can readily gain information online.

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, not all information online is accurate. Considering

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are yet to have the ability to fully distinguish exact data. In conclusion, it seems to me that easy access to electronic

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can lead to

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spending more

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on their

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. And I believe that

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trend has cons.

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, parents should encourage them to exercise

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of using

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