You have recently moved to a new place and haven’t got a chance to tell your friend. Write a letter to your friend, Where and why you move from there Compare your new place to old Where do u live now

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Dear Navid, I'm writing to tell you I've moved to a new flat. As you may remember my previous neighbourhood was too noisy because there was a primary school just 200 meters far from my apartment. Since I've been working remotely for a

while

, I realised that I need a quiet place so that I can concentrate on my work. I found a wonderful flat in the northern part of the city. My new neighbourhood is calmer, so I can focus on my job. The apartment has two bedrooms and a huge kitchen. It is far bigger than my previous flat.

Hence

, I can hold parties here. It would be wonderful. Unfortunately, there are some minor improvements that should be done to the flat.

As a result

, I decided to stay with my brother Masud during

this

period. He's prepared a guest room for me so it is quite convenient there. If you have spare time, come here for a drink. Best regards, Amir

Submitted by amirghas92 on Fri May 19 2023

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