Some people claim that not enough the waste from homes is recycled. they say that the only way to increase recycling is for government to make it a legal requirement. to what extent do you think laws are need to make people recycle more of their waste?

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is not adequate. so, it is necessary to enforce citizens

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. in my opinion,

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are necessary. and, in

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with, our garbages are damaging to precious nature.and, some individual are unconcerned about

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issue.

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, some citizen doesn't care about nature and pollute

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easily without trying to recycle their waste.

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laws

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can help us to diminish pollution and other damage of not recycling. People

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would obey the

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of the punishments.

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, governments can consider a fine for disregarding

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. so, more and more citizens will be forced to

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recycle. but

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some, individuals

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. and, it might be because people cannot see the impacts of doing the recycle anytime soon.

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, citizens may not know the exact effect of recycling.

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, maybe they don't know how many trees will be preserved by recycling a notebook. Some say we should educate individuals. but, I would argue that

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solution will take too much to work

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period we are hurting our environment . so,

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isn't a good solution. conclusion, I think

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should consider some legal enforcement for recycling. because

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our nature is a commodity and some people are hurting our environment.