You stayed at your friend’s house when you attended a conference in Australia. Unfortunately, you left a large envelope with some important documents in your room. Write a letter to your friend. In the letter: -Thank your friend for the stay. -Describe where you left the envelope. -Ask him/her to return it to you by post.

Dear Sam, How is life treating you? I hope everything is going as you wish. And you are enjoying your life. You are very lucky to have the coastal beach before your eyes every single day. And thank you for your hospitality when I was in your home. Actually, I am writing
this
letter to make a request for some documents which I forgot
them
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in your house. To put it more simply, I left the envelope with several important degrees on the
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table next to the JBL Speaker.
Hence
, I would really be grateful if you could send me the envelope with a perfect package to preserve the degrees in that by post services.
In addition
, I will
also
take care of all postal charges. Have fun and say hello to your folks
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Thank you in advance for your help, Best wishes Kambiz
Submitted by kambiz.pirzad on

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task response
Ensure to include all requested information and follow the letter format more closely for a better task response score.
coherence and cohesion
Make sure to organize the ideas and information more cohesively for a higher coherence and cohesion score.

Word Count

IELTS says that you should write a minimum of 150 words in writing task 1. If you go under word count you will lose marks in task response.

A very long letter will not give you a higher band score.

Aim for between 160 to 190 words in writing task 1. This will ensure a concise letter and will be realistic in terms of time management. You have only 20 minutes to write the letter and you need around 5 minutes of planning time, so you will not be able to write a long letter in 15 minutes.

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