The pie charts below show the percentage of time working adults spent on different activities in a particular country in 1958 and 2008. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant
The two pictures illustrate the proportion of time which was allocated by adults in a day to sleep, travel to
work
, work
, relax at home, go out, and other
in a nation in 1958 and 2008. Add a missing verb
do other
Overall
, the highest percentage of activities
in those years was working, and travelling to work
was the least was the first picture and going out and other activities
in the second one.
Looking into the details, in 1958, having a job was the biggest number of activities
at 33% followed by sleeping at 32%. It grew by 9% in the next 5 years while
the rates of sleeping levelled off by 7%. Going out with friends or family was done at 19% of adults and it remained significant falling down to 6% in 2008. Both chilling at home and travelling to work
increased moderately between those two years of 5% and 4% respectively. Moreover
, the rates of other activities
like doing hobbies or playing sports were unchanged either in 1958 or in 2008.Submitted by anonymous on
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Vocabulary: Replace the words work, activities with synonyms.
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