You are going to take a short holiday in Singapore and you want to rent a holiday apartment while you are there. Write to the tourist information office. In your letter: -Explain what you need. -Say when you plan to be there. -Ask for information about prices.

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Dear sir, I am writing

this

letter in order to rent studio flat in the center of Singapore. In

this

way, we are two person, and we need a clean and calm studio flat with all types of facilities and possibilities,

such

as twin bed and separated bath and washroom.

Furthermore

, we arrived at that city next week on Sunday morning at 9:00 o’clock.

In addition

, we would stay in that city for five nights. From

this

perspective, it is really important for us to everything will be done about reservation and so on so forth.

Hence

, that would be very kind of you if you tell me about the cost of the rent studio flat for five nights and the possibilities of paying. Thank you in advance for your help, Sincerely, Kambiz Pirzad My contact information is as follows: [email protected] And you can contact me on

this

number as well : 00989175758005

Submitted by kambiz.pirzad on Sat May 20 2023

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task response

Ensure that the letter is more focused on the specific requirements for renting a holiday apartment. Be clear and concise in your request for information about prices and availability. Avoid including unnecessary details such as the arrival time and duration of stay.

coherence cohesion

The logical structure of the letter is generally clear, but there are some areas where the information could be organized more effectively. Consider grouping relevant details together and using signposting language to improve coherence and cohesion.

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5Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
0Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
0Grammar mistakes
 

8 paragraphs

153 words

8.00

Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 9.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 9.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 6.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

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