The graph below shows the total revenue of three pizza places in Vietnam. The figures were taken in 2017.

The graph below shows the total revenue of three pizza places in Vietnam. The figures were taken in 2017.
The picture illustrates the total
income
of three
pizza
outlets in Vietnam in 2017 in
SUS
million
.
Overall
, the revenue of all brands fluctuated, and
Pizza
Hut got the least
income
in that year. Looking into the details, The total revenue of The
Pizza
Company and Domino
Pizza
have similar rates at around 33
SUS
million
in the initial year, and there was a sharp decrease of 20
SUS
million
in February. Afterwards, the sales of The
pizza
company inclined smoothly to 28
SUS
million
while
Domino
Pizza
at
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24
SUS
million
in May. Their
income
varied until hit the peak in July at 41
SUS
million
and 30
SUS
million
respectively in July.
Then
the money that they collected levelled off on the next month and remained steady until November. Both of that brands grew slightly to around 30
SUS
million
at the end
of the year.
Pizza
Hut gained
income
starting at 18
SUS
million
and fell by 10
SUS
million
in the next month.
Then
there was a slow rose until 16
SUS
million
in June. Afterwards, the revenue decreased gradually and reached the lowest
income
at 3
SUS
million
in September. Until December, the profits they got oscillated to 4
SUS
million
.
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